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•Ψ• Sinnerman •Ψ•

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SMACK…  SPLAT…  SLAP…  SMACK…
Damn!  They were going to hear the sound of  his bare feet on the pavement even if  they couldn’t see him in the shadows of  the old factory!  What had happened to his shoes?  His memory was a jumbled mess of  blurry images…  all he knew for certain was that  “they”  were chasing him!

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CRACK…  RUSTLE…  SNAP…  CRACK…
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unning in the forest at dusk was too dangerous!  He’d better stop until full dark if  he didn’t want to be discovered ~ every footfall crunched leaves or snapped a twig.  Breathing heavily,  he slid as far under the old tree root as he could get.  He covered himself  with the detritus of  the forest floor and hoped that no animal would catch the scent of  blood on him if  he fell asleep.

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SPLISH…  SPLOSH…  SPLASH…

Running through the stream under the full moon left him too exposed.  The glint off  of  the blade of  the knife clutched in his left hand might catch someone’s eye.  He paused long enough to bury it beneath a pile of  rocks in the shallow water.

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CRUNCH…  RATTLE…  SPLISH…  SLURP…

Running along the narrow pebbled bank of  the creek sent stones skittering off  into the grass and tumbling down into the water.  His foot slid along with the tiny rocks and,  before he knew what happened,  his left foot was sucked into the oozing mud.  He fell to his knees in the stream and thrust his hands up to the heavens.
“Help me,  Lord!”  he cried.  “I  have sinned but i am asking for your forgiveness.”
But the Lord God refused,  telling him  “GO TO THE DEVIL,  SINNERMAN!”

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HISS…  SPLAT…  SPLASH…

The smell of  sulfur burned his lungs…  trying to take shallow breaths,  he waded through the stream as it began to bubble and hiss at the edges,  his bare feet already blistering on the hot stones beneath the water.
“Lucifer!  Lucifer!”  he called out.  “I  beg sanctuary!  Tell me what I  must do!”
The Devil sneered and said  “OFF WITH YOU, FILTH!  GET OUT OF  MY SIGHT!”

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SHUFFLE…  SCRAPE…  SHUFFLE…  SCRAPE..

They had set the wolves on him.  He could hear the howling not too far away but his raw,  bloody feet could not move any faster.  Was it still the same night?  Or had he lost an entire day like he had lost his clothes and his memories?
Blood spurting onto walls…   onto the sheets…  onto him…
red,  crimson,  scarlet.  What you called it didn’t matter.
That bright vermilion spraying all over was the only clear memory he had.

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Clothed in naught but the darkness,  ol’  Sinnerman shook his head like a dog,  trying to get the sweat out of  his eyes.  Not that it mattered if  he could see.  Rejected by both Jehovah and Beelzebub…..      he had nowhere to go.

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When even Lucifer

has shunned ye…..      Oh,  Sinnerman,

just what did you do?

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“Sinnerman”    Nina Simone

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the final paragraph/haikū-senryū  haibun portion beginning “clothed in naught…”  was originally posted  16 February 2012
the  “back story”  was published  at  Microstory A Week  11 April 2012  { my gratitude to  Steve Isaak }  { revised ever so slightly }

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artwork  ~   “Last Angel”   Nicholas Roerich
{  public domain }

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“Sinnerman”    Nina Simone

lyrics ~
{i think these lyrics are incomplete but hopefully not inaccurate.}

Songwriters:  Nina Simone

Oh, Sinnerman, where you gonna run to?
 Sinnerman, where you gonna run to?
Where you gonna run to?
All along dem day.

Well I run to the rock, please hide me.
I run to the Rock, please hide me.
I run to the Rock, please hide me, Lord.
All along dem day.

But the rock cried out, I can’t hide you.
The Rock cried out, I can’t hide you.
The Rock cried out, I ain’t gonna hide you guy.
All along dem day.

I said, “Rock, what’s a matter with you, Rock?”
“Don’t you see I need you, Rock?”
Lord, Lord, Lord.
All along dem day.

So I run to the river, it was bleedin’.
 I run to the sea, it was bleedin’.
 I run to the sea, it was bleedin’.
All along dem day.

So I run to the river, it was boilin’.
 I run to the sea, it was boilin’.
 I run to the sea, it was boilin’.
All along dem day.

So I ran to the Lord, please hide me, Lord.
 Don’t you see me prayin’?
 Don’t you see me down here prayin’?

But the Lord said, “Go to the devil.”
The Lord said, “Go to the devil.”
He said, “Go to the devil.”
All along dem day.

So I ran to the devil, he was waitin’.
 I ran to the devil, he was waitin’.
 I ran to the devil, he was waitin’.
All on that day.

I cried, power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)
Power

Bring down (Power to da Lord)
Bring down (Power to da Lord)
Bring down (Power to da Lord)
Bring down (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)
Oh yeah, oh yeah, oh yeah

Well, I run to the river, it was boilin’.
 I run to the sea, it was boilin’.
 I run to the sea, it was boilin’.
All along dem day.

So I ran to the Lord I said,
“Lord hide me, please hide me.”
“Please help me.”
All along dem day.

He said, “Child, where were you
 When you ought a been prayin’?”
 I said,”Lord, Lord, hear me prayin’.”
 Lord, Lord, hear me prayin’.
 Lord, Lord, hear me prayin’.”
All along dem day.

Sinnerman you ought a be prayin’.
 Ought a be prayin’, Sinnerman.
 Ought a be prayin’.
All on that day.

I cried, power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)

Go down (Power to da Lord)
Go down (Power to da Lord)
Go down (Power to da Lord)

Power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)

Oh woh, power, power, Lord.
Don’t you know.
Don’t you know, I need you Lord?
Don’t you know that I need you?
Don’t you know that I need you?
Power, power, power, Lord.

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∙Ꭳ∙ •Ꮝ• ∙Ꭳ∙ is anyone there?

the silence
wraps ’round me
cold  as the  ice
around my heart

regret gnaws at my soul
for the  things i shouldn’t have done
i try to soothe my conscience
for those things i  should have done,  but never did

the  lack of  sound
threatens to overwhelm me
memories keep rising in the quietude
bringing an abundance of  sorrow

i’m waiting on a jagged precipice
my fear carried by the wind
“is  anyone there?”
…..only  echoes slowly fading

yet i  feel the presence
of  a multitude of  sins…..
smooth lies told without compuction
little wounds inflicted carelessly

not even the sighs of  the stars
can be heard,  though i feel their breath
nipping at my humanity
leaving me shivering with dread

brought to my knees
i  pray for forgiveness
too late…..
there’s no one there to grant me absolution

with trepidation
i  hold my breath and listen
the stillness finally broken
by my misdeeds clattering to be recounted

resignation comes with recognition
for this will be my Hell
damnation tailor-made
penitance for being so unkind…..     so cruel

an endless evocation
of  my life’s transgressions
…..only now…..
i will feel
every pain i caused another

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“Is There Anybody Out There?”    Roger Waters  { Pink Floyd }

image ~  charcoal sketch

this is my submission to ~

Whoops!   at   POETRY JAM
prompt:   looking back at past regrets


thank you,  Mary!

Open Link Monday  at  imaginary garden with real toads
submit a new or old poem


thank you,  Kerry!

Prompt #160   at   Carry on Tuesday
prompt:  use all or part of  Is there anybody there?
part of the opening line of  Walter de la Mare’s poem  “The Listeners”


thank you,  Keith!

Vice Versa #3     at     Poets United
prompt:   use all four words ~ Jagged/Smooth & Lack/Abundance


thank you,  Mary!

OpenLinkNight ~ Week 49   at   dVerse ~ Poets Pub
submit a new or old poem


thank you,  Joseph!

Prompt 225    at   One Single Impression
prompt:   waiting


thank you,  Harshad!

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A to Z Challenge ~ “S” •Ψ• sinnerman •Ψ• {the back story}

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SMACK…  SPLAT… SLAP…  SMACK…
damn!  they were going to hear the sound of  his bare feet on the pavement even if  they couldn’t see him in the shadows of  the old factory!  what had happened to his shoes?  his memory was a jumbled mess of  blurry images…  all he knew for certain was that  “they”  were chasing him!

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CRACK…  RUSTLE…  SNAP…  CRACK…
running in the forest at dusk was too dangerous!  he’d better stop until full dark if  he didn’t want to be discovered ~ every footfall crunched leaves or snapped a twig.  breathing heavily, he slid as far under the old tree root as he could get.  he covered himself  with the detritus of  the forest floor and hoped that no animal would catch the scent of  blood on him if  he fell asleep.

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SPLISH…  SPLOSH…  SPLASH…

running through the stream under the full moon left him too exposed.  the glint off  of  the blade of  the knife clutched in his left hand might catch someone’s eye.  he paused long enough to bury it beneath a pile of  rocks in the shallow water.

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CRUNCH…  RATTLE…   SPLISH…  SLURP…

running along the narrow pebbled bank of  the creek sent stones skittering off  into the grass and tumbling down into the water.  his foot slid along with the tiny rocks and, before he knew what happened, his left foot was sucked into the oozing mud.  he fell to his knees in the stream and thrust his hands up to the heavens.
“help me, Lord!”  he cried.  “i haved sinned but i am asking for your forgiveness.”
but the Lord God refused, telling him  “GO TO THE DEVIL, SINNERMAN!”

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HISS…  SPLAT…  SPLASH…

the smell of  sulfur burned his lungs…  sweat burned in his eyes…  trying to take shallow breaths, he waded through the stream as it began to bubble and hiss at the edges, his bare feet already blistering on the hot stones beneath the water.
“Lucifer!  Lucifer!”  he called out.  “i beg sanctuary!  tell me what i must do!”
the Devil sneered and said  “OFF WITH YOU, FILTH!  GET OUT OF  MY SIGHT!”

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SHUFFLE…  SCRAPE…  SHUFFLE…  SCRAPE..

they had set the wolves on him.  he could hear the howling not too far away but his raw, bloody feet could not move any faster.  was it still the same night?  or had he lost an entire day like he had lost his clothes and his memories?
blood spurting onto walls…   onto the sheets…  onto him…
red,  crimson,  scarlet.  what you called it didn’t matter.
that bright vermilion spraying all over was the only clear memory he had.

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clothed in naught but the darkness, ol’ sinnerman shook his head like a dog, trying to get the sweat out of  his eyes. not that it mattered if  he could see.  rejected by both Jehovah and Beelzebub…..      he had nowhere to go.

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when e’en Lucifer

has shunned ye…..      oh, sinnerman,

just what did you do?

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“Sinnerman”    Nina Simone

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the final paragraph/haikū-senryū  haibun portion beginning “clothed in naught…”  originally posted  16 February 2012
the “back story” published  at  Microstory A Week  11 April 2012
{  my gratitude to  Steve Isaak  }

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i am participating in ~

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NaBloPoMoSoup

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“Sinnerman”    Nina Simone

lyrics ~
{i think these lyrics are incomplete but hopefully not inaccurate.}

Songwriters:  Nina Simone

Oh, Sinnerman, where you gonna run to?
 Sinnerman, where you gonna run to?
Where you gonna run to?
All along dem day.

Well I run to the rock, please hide me.
I run to the Rock, please hide me.
I run to the Rock, please hide me, Lord.
All along dem day.

But the rock cried out, I can’t hide you.
The Rock cried out, I can’t hide you.
The Rock cried out, I ain’t gonna hide you guy.
All along dem day.

I said, “Rock, what’s a matter with you, Rock?”
“Don’t you see I need you, Rock?”
Lord, Lord, Lord.
All along dem day.

So I run to the river, it was bleedin’.
 I run to the sea, it was bleedin’.
 I run to the sea, it was bleedin’.
All along dem day.

So I run to the river, it was boilin’.
 I run to the sea, it was boilin’.
 I run to the sea, it was boilin’.
All along dem day.

So I ran to the Lord, please hide me, Lord.
 Don’t you see me prayin’?
 Don’t you see me down here prayin’?

But the Lord said, “Go to the devil.”
The Lord said, “Go to the devil.”
He said, “Go to the devil.”
All along dem day.

So I ran to the devil, he was waitin’.
 I ran to the devil, he was waitin’.
 I ran to the devil, he was waitin’.
All on that day.

I cried, power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)
Power

Bring down (Power to da Lord)
Bring down (Power to da Lord)
Bring down (Power to da Lord)
Bring down (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)
Oh yeah, oh yeah, oh yeah

Well, I run to the river, it was boilin’.
 I run to the sea, it was boilin’.
 I run to the sea, it was boilin’.
All along dem day.

So I ran to the Lord I said,
“Lord hide me, please hide me.”
“Please help me.”
All along dem day.

He said, “Child, where were you
 When you ought a been prayin’?”
 I said,”Lord, Lord, hear me prayin’.”
 Lord, Lord, hear me prayin’.
 Lord, Lord, hear me prayin’.”
All along dem day.

Sinnerman you ought a be prayin’.
 Ought a be prayin’, Sinnerman.
 Ought a be prayin’.
All on that day.

I cried, power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)

Go down (Power to da Lord)
Go down (Power to da Lord)
Go down (Power to da Lord)

Power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)

Oh woh, power, power, Lord.
Don’t you know.
Don’t you know, I need you Lord?
Don’t you know that I need you?
Don’t you know that I need you?
Power, power, power, Lord.

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›·•Ψ•·‹ sinnerman ›·•Ψ•·‹ the back story….

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clothed in naught but the darkness, ol’ sinnerman shook his head like a dog, trying to get the sweat out of  his eyes. not that it mattered if  he could see.  rejected by both Jehovah and Beelzebub…..      he had nowhere to go.

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when e’en Lucifer

has shunned ye…..      oh, sinnerman,

just what did you do?

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if  you would like to read the back story of  the sinnerman,  please  click  HERE  to go to  Microstory A Week  where my story of  what led up to this point has been published.  {my thanks to Steve Isaak.}

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“Sinnerman”    Nina Simone

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originally posted 16 February 2012

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i am participating in ~

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NaBloPoMo Soup

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“Sinnerman”    Nina Simone

lyrics ~
{i think these lyrics are incomplete but hopefully not inaccurate.}

Songwriters:  Nina Simone

Oh, Sinnerman, where you gonna run to?
Sinnerman, where you gonna run to?
Where you gonna run to?
All along dem day.

Well I run to the rock, please hide me.
I run to the Rock, please hide me.
I run to the Rock, please hide me, Lord.
All along dem day.

But the rock cried out, I can’t hide you.
The Rock cried out, I can’t hide you.
The Rock cried out, I ain’t gonna hide you guy.
All along dem day.

I said, “Rock, what’s a matter with you, Rock?”
“Don’t you see I need you, Rock?”
Lord, Lord, Lord.
All along dem day.

So I run to the river, it was bleedin’.
I run to the sea, it was bleedin’.
I run to the sea, it was bleedin’.
All along dem day.

So I run to the river, it was boilin’.
I run to the sea, it was boilin’.
I run to the sea, it was boilin’.
All along dem day.

So I ran to the Lord, please hide me, Lord.
Don’t you see me prayin’?
Don’t you see me down here prayin’?

But the Lord said, “Go to the devil.”
The Lord said, “Go to the devil.”
He said, “Go to the devil.”
All along dem day.

So I ran to the devil, he was waitin’.
I ran to the devil, he was waitin’.
I ran to the devil, he was waitin’.
All on that day.

I cried, power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)
Power

Bring down (Power to da Lord)
Bring down (Power to da Lord)
Bring down (Power to da Lord)
Bring down (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)
Oh yeah, oh yeah, oh yeah

Well, I run to the river, it was boilin’.
I run to the sea, it was boilin’.
I run to the sea, it was boilin’.
All along dem day.

So I ran to the Lord I said,
“Lord hide me, please hide me.”
“Please help me.”
All along dem day.

He said, “Child, where were you
When you ought a been prayin’?”
I said,”Lord, Lord, hear me prayin’.”
Lord, Lord, hear me prayin’.
Lord, Lord, hear me prayin’.”
All along dem day.

Sinnerman you ought a be prayin’.
Ought a be prayin’, Sinnerman.
Ought a be prayin’.
All on that day.

I cried, power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)

Go down (Power to da Lord)
Go down (Power to da Lord)
Go down (Power to da Lord)

Power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)

Oh woh, power, power, Lord.
Don’t you know.
Don’t you know, I need you Lord?
Don’t you know that I need you?
Don’t you know that I need you?
Power, power, power, Lord.

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›·•Ψ•·‹ sinnerman ›·•Ψ•·‹ #FMHCD16

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clothed in naught but the darkness, ol’ sinnerman shook his head like a dog, trying to get the sweat out of  his eyes. not that it mattered if  he could see.  rejected by both Jehovah and Beelzebub…..      he had nowhere to go.

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when e’en Lucifer

has shunned ye…..      oh, sinnerman,

just what did you do?

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i could not resist featuring another Nina Simone song, even though it’s the second in a week.

“Sinnerman”    Nina Simone

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this is my submission to ~

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The Haiku Challenge   at   Few Miles
Day 16  prompt:    theme ~ sin   form ~ haibun {max. 150 words}

thank you Someone is Special for hosting the challenge!

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Friday Flash 55   see the   G-Man  at  Mr. KnowItAll
flash fiction 55     thanks, G!

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i am also participating in ~

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NaBloPoMo Soup

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“Sinnerman”    Nina Simone

lyrics ~
{i think these lyrics are incomplete but hopefully not inaccurate.}

Songwriters:  Nina Simone

Oh, Sinnerman, where you gonna run to?
Sinnerman, where you gonna run to?
Where you gonna run to?
All along dem day.

Well I run to the rock, please hide me.
I run to the Rock, please hide me.
I run to the Rock, please hide me, Lord.
All along dem day.

But the rock cried out, I can’t hide you.
The Rock cried out, I can’t hide you.
The Rock cried out, I ain’t gonna hide you guy.
All along dem day.

I said, “Rock, what’s a matter with you, Rock?”
“Don’t you see I need you, Rock?”
Lord, Lord, Lord.
All along dem day.

So I run to the river, it was bleedin’.
I run to the sea, it was bleedin’.
I run to the sea, it was bleedin’.
All along dem day.

So I run to the river, it was boilin’.
I run to the sea, it was boilin’.
I run to the sea, it was boilin’.
All along dem day.

So I ran to the Lord, please hide me, Lord.
Don’t you see me prayin’?
Don’t you see me down here prayin’?

But the Lord said, “Go to the devil.”
The Lord said, “Go to the devil.”
He said, “Go to the devil.”
All along dem day.

So I ran to the devil, he was waitin’.
I ran to the devil, he was waitin’.
I ran to the devil, he was waitin’.
All on that day.

I cried, power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)
Power

Bring down (Power to da Lord)
Bring down (Power to da Lord)
Bring down (Power to da Lord)
Bring down (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)
Oh yeah, oh yeah, oh yeah

Well, I run to the river, it was boilin’.
I run to the sea, it was boilin’.
I run to the sea, it was boilin’.
All along dem day.

So I ran to the Lord I said,
“Lord hide me, please hide me.”
“Please help me.”
All along dem day.

He said, “Child, where were you
When you ought a been prayin’?”
I said,”Lord, Lord, hear me prayin’.”
Lord, Lord, hear me prayin’.
Lord, Lord, hear me prayin’.”
All along dem day.

Sinnerman you ought a be prayin’.
Ought a be prayin’, Sinnerman.
Ought a be prayin’.
All on that day.

I cried, power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)

Go down (Power to da Lord)
Go down (Power to da Lord)
Go down (Power to da Lord)

Power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)
Power (Power to da Lord)

Oh woh, power, power, Lord.
Don’t you know.
Don’t you know, I need you Lord?
Don’t you know that I need you?
Don’t you know that I need you?
Power, power, power, Lord.

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